31 Dec 2013

Falling In Love



Strange feeling creeps inside him
As she walks with a shy smile.
Her kohl filled eyes speak a lot today,
Asking is she looking good.
Stunned by her elegant beauty,
He nods smilingly
While he is left alone in that crowd,
Watching his best friend getting married.
Too late to realize what he's losing


Wishing You All A Very Happy New Year!
God Bless!


24 comments:

  1. Happy New Year
    Kisses
    www.beingbeautifulandpretty.com

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  2. Good one.

    Happy New Year to you!

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  3. Realization dawned...but late. Sigh.
    Beautiful poem. :)

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  4. Beautiful. Tender. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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  5. [ Smiles ] That was a beautiful poem and do have yourself a fabulous 2014!

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  6. That was beautiful!

    Wish you and yours a brilliant 2014!!

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  7. superbly described. BTW, a very happy new year to you and your readers :-)

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  8. Beautiful post to start the year..! Happy 2014 ;)

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  9. beautiful, so less words, still aptly described! loved the 55 word story :D

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  10. Beautiful words. The story held me till the end, and funny can be a reality for many...

    Richa

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  11. Beautiful!! a great start for 2014!! just loved it! nd yaa Happie New Year :)

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  12. *sigh*.. if only...
    Beautifully written Meera :D

    Have a wonderful 2014 :)

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  13. Ahan, I could sense that love is in the air! :D
    Let's reciprocate this feeling in the year 2014.

    Regards
    Sammya

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  14. 'Sigh' 'Sigh' .. Well written Meera :)

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  15. Thanks for posting this wonderful words...
    ELALA

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  16. Thanks everyone for dropping by and liked this little read. Wishes. :)

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  17. hmmmm you know its an art to convey the feelings through few words and you hav done it .

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  18. Wow, what a weave! Brilliant!
    And a happy New Year to you!

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  19. The last line is hitting!! Lovely 55 Rat!

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  20. Such longing and pining demonstrated in so few words. I love it! Happy New Year!

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  21. Lovely 55-word poem dear :) Our gain! No loss :)

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  22. lovely 55 ..is there any connection ? :D

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