25 Aug 2013

Bat


Courtesy - Google

Blindly flying high
A screeching sound for its sight
The vampire of the night.

62 comments:

  1. Nice thought process..
    Keep in touch,
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    1. Very good. I like your acrostic haiku very much:)
      Tigerbrite

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    2. thanks... welcome to my space. keep visiting.. :)

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  2. Vampire of the Night,Not fearing the night as others rather use it as their strength...
    Nice ONe Meera.. :-)

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    1. not fearing the night.. yep.. that's their strength. thanks so much for your feedback, Harsha :)

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  3. well-formed Haiku dear friend !! Impressive Meera !

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    1. check out .. i posted an approx translation of my hindi poem!

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    2. i appreciate it. sure will check it out. :)

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  5. I just read my first few haiku after I started blogging. Looks tough. Wow! Really good one :)

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  6. glad you liked my lil attempt on Haiku as well. thanks for dropping by Preeti. :)

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  7. This one was good :) I kept reading it as rat :P

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    1. thanks Nanka. keep visiting my space :)

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  9. Very well written!

    www.numerounity.com

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    1. hey thanks.. its always good to see you here, Ekta.. glad you dropped by :)

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  10. Deadly and crisp...Li'l nibble :)

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    1. am always delighted to see your comment here in my space, ma'm. thanks :)

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  11. Nicely written. Loved it. :)

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    1. thank you. welcome to my space :)

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  13. RAT wiriting about BAT? :) Good attempt at haiku.simlpe and crisply conveying the message.

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    1. ya rat's li'l attempt.. lol thanks Jiggs :)

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  14. a nice attempt... great concept! :)

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    1. thanks a lot Anju... wish you have a wonderful week :)

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  15. "Vampire of the night" Good line.

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    1. thank you alice. keep visiting :)

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  16. Haha ha, i wil die of laughter. U hav glorified the bat, making it sound like a superhero. Just look at that pic...hee hee, so cute

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    1. lol looks like you forgot about the glorified superhero Dark Knight? :)

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  17. A haiku on Vampires. Good one !

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    1. thanks. welcome to my space. :)

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    1. its not a bad name.. i jus mentioned by one of its kind. dont you know there are 'Vampire Bats' ? :)

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  20. if its d vampire of the night... wat is it doing at dawn or dusk? sun shining... its not dark isnt it :P

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    1. sun glows as the sun sets. and thats when bats come out.. thats what i believe depicted in the picture. :-/

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